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Holy Spirit - A Tanka Poem (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Lover of my soul Delightful pleasure You bring Everyday I wait Make my spirit rise with You I live to dwell in Your love. Tanka meter: 5-7-5-7-7

http://mulberryfairy 29-Aug-10/9:24 PM
I would separate every and day if I were you, because everyday isn't the same as every day, everyday implies boring or commonplace.




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