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Holy Spirit - A Tanka Poem (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Lover of my soul Delightful pleasure You bring Everyday I wait Make my spirit rise with You I live to dwell in Your love. Tanka meter: 5-7-5-7-7

Dovina 1-Aug-10/5:44 PM
Englsish tanka does not have to harness itself to 57577, but here you do it without feeling harnessed. The only exception might be that "delight" and "pleasure" are about the same.




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