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My Soul Cries Out (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

O Lord my heart is troubled deep down inside It’s like I don’t know why, or what It is you want me to know. Speak to me Lord all that I need to know And may I hear you whisper Words of comfort. My heart dwells on every word That comes from you Lord. My heart is overwhelmed With doubts and fear And only you can ease my discomfort of spirit. I need you Lord to sense my every doubt And erase those emotions that cause me to Be disappointed in you. I desire your ever glowing spirit. Anoint me Lord. Fill me with a burning desire to please you In everything I do, And may your Holy Name be praised forevermore.

Skamper 19-May-07/4:21 PM
There's a lot of this kind of poetry out there - standing out is a challenge.

"And erase those emotions that cause me to
Be disappointed in you."

A clever line - a definate keeper




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