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The Corner Tavern (Free verse) by jessicazee

Pulltabs and buzz-ins, raffles, a current holiday mood Surprise me with your jukebox and play me one stringy song for vinyl perching stools, for nicknames and pleasantries for weeping chilled mugs and dogs who drink beer I'll give you a crispy dollar to hear the one about the wheels and how they go round and how I'm watching them

Stephen Robins 19-Apr-07/8:57 AM
Dogs who drink beer? Where did you think up this line? for dogs drink water not beer.




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