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ReplyTo a comment on A KISS TO BUILD A DREAM ON . . . by stevopoet.

Stephen Robins10 Apr 2007

This is a terrible poem, if indeed it could be called a poem. Showing off that you know Gibraltar has a rock and that Thebes lies next door to the Garden of Eden is not sufficient to make up for the appallingly squelchy line: "That which cannot become grime in the wind."