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Dream Grower (Free verse) by Enkidu

Grow a dream and I'll finagle it from out your ear, and give you a subtle smirk. Grow a dream and the years of planting from my eyes will coax petals to bloom from your smile. Grow a dream weakly and my fingers will drown it: my digits fluttering as soft rain where the dawn is fleshy and brilliant. Grow this dream for me, strongly, and for fortune's sake, your dream-vines will twist and choke my own until we wake.

Stephen Robins 4-Jan-07/7:28 AM
I thought this said "Dream Gower" which could have been about the majestic cover drive of the finest left handed batsman this country has ever produced. However you had to ruin it by not mentioning that at all, and actually having a title which resembles "Dream Gower", instead you seem to have produced a poem which could easily have been written by an eight year old who has been drinking too much pottery glaze.




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