Replying to a comment on:

Prayer (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

I wait on the Lord, morning and night would I call on Him, I search,I seek answers to my questions… And then like the rush of the stormy winds He quenches, fills the void of empty soul: torrents of love and grace. He spoke in the stillness of my heart.

nypoet22 17-Sep-06/3:43 AM
what did He say? what did He say? as the introduction to a series i could see this poem working, but i don't think it stands on its own.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001