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Prayer (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

I wait on the Lord, morning and night would I call on Him, I search,I seek answers to my questions… And then like the rush of the stormy winds He quenches, fills the void of empty soul: torrents of love and grace. He spoke in the stillness of my heart.

half.italian 15-Sep-06/10:29 PM
I dont particularly like God poems. But this one is good. It reads better if you get rid of "would I call on him" and "quenching" and "torrents of love and grace" IMHO




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