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Farewell, Kind Lover (Free verse) by Dovina

You depart as thunderstorm having cracked and boomed overhead and underground carried off by cool breath of God You awaken seeds tender, brave sprouts feeling the sky for twist of updraft overshadow of cloud

amanda_dcosta 15-Sep-06/7:43 PM
This is much better than your previous post. Anybody I know?




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