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canada day (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

I'm alive I'm born at midnight again. premature stars arcing sparks snap across vastness in darkest sky uncountable blessings just beyond the pane.

wilco 5-Jul-06/7:53 PM
The spacing works okay and there's something I like about it...still, just not overly impressed with this one Mr. Devil.




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