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My secret to life (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

We say that life is difficult, impossible to live ! If we just pause and view our hearts there's nothing we can give. We see the many broken homes and children in the streets with our own eyes we see the blind we see each others' grief. Sorrow fills our very lives With hardships, guilt and chains, Each one struggling to survive on his own strength his pain. It is not very easy to bye-pass the things we see; Yet we forcefully close the door of our hearts with lock and key. Many have come to show the way that each of us should live Yet, no where do we reach our goal unless Jesus walks right in. His life He lived by love alone Love was His only strength. By love he healed the deaf and dumb And all with worldly strain. His Love brought us our victory death could not keep Him bound with love He broke the chains that held us prisoners all around. He gave His crown of love's freedom To start our lives afresh To marvel in His radiance Bring out in us our best. So take a step to Jesus, To the glorious one enthroned And find your heart uplifted To step out fresh in love.

Caducus 23-Jun-06/1:37 AM
typo - by-pass

not bad, I like the occasional rhyme and the fact you wrote what followed on well as opposed to rhyme overdose.




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