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Money Back (Free verse) by drnick

wikedddd smiles and fifty dollars and no apologies you came snd shoved your fist inside with no apologies your vomit yur face your nose and throat no apologies stupid face will always show there's no apologeze.

amanda_dcosta 22-Jun-06/10:49 PM
Hmmmmm. I like the last two lines that sum up the first six lines . Other than that I ain't relating much to it although I get the scene. Sorry to disappoint.




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