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Tang Soo Do See Do (Concrete) by ecargo

Low block front punch feint jab dance back high kick side kick tap block high dodge right spin kick sweep punch punch and duck dance in retreat not quick enough to block the kick a BURST a BLOOM bow out repeat

amanda_dcosta 29-Apr-06/12:03 PM
ecargo... hmmm this is pretty good. Not particulary to my taste, but even then I think I must be frank and fair. You deserve a 10.

P.S. Ironically, this is the stuff I vote a zero here in my home. Punches and jabs..... I'm scared to see it physically, wondering when my kids (biggest kid - my husband) will end up with stitches (which is nothing new). An in the end my husband stands and bows pretending to be the winner among the lot. Proudly. :-)




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