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Because You Love Me (Lyric) by amanda_dcosta

It's waking hours. I walk aimlessly Wondering where my steps would lead me. When I hear your voice whisper to me That you love me. It's not aimless any more My steps progress And my day begins All because you say you love me. No matter what I do during the day No matter where I go; the road I take Hand in hand with you my love, You make my day, Because you love me.

amanda_dcosta 4-Apr-06/10:09 AM
Cadacus... thanks a ton for your vote and critique. I'm priveledged to have your vote on my page which I normally do not see around.

As for wanting to know why I love him... I don't specify that, as what matters to me is the fact that I am loved no matter what. 'The road I take' means that however I live my life... good or bad, I'm still loved, irrespective of whether or how much I love him. That's the love of God. Even if I might not believe in Him, He still believes in me!




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