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Because You Love Me (Lyric) by amanda_dcosta

It's waking hours. I walk aimlessly Wondering where my steps would lead me. When I hear your voice whisper to me That you love me. It's not aimless any more My steps progress And my day begins All because you say you love me. No matter what I do during the day No matter where I go; the road I take Hand in hand with you my love, You make my day, Because you love me.

amanda_dcosta 31-Mar-06/11:07 AM
Thank you drnick for your critique. You might find it more comfortable this way.....but you will see the name of Jesus in most of my poems.... even the one coming next. I don't think my freedom of expression in poetry can be stopped by anything or anyone. It's just that it's in me! The name of Jesus!

And P.S.. Santa did not die for me. Jesus did!

All the same, thank you for looking this poem up. Hope you get to like my style.




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