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Because You Love Me (Lyric) by amanda_dcosta

It's waking hours. I walk aimlessly Wondering where my steps would lead me. When I hear your voice whisper to me That you love me. It's not aimless any more My steps progress And my day begins All because you say you love me. No matter what I do during the day No matter where I go; the road I take Hand in hand with you my love, You make my day, Because you love me.

amanda_dcosta 31-Mar-06/10:20 AM
Alchemy, full marks to you and JK Tyres! You seemed to understand this perfectly well.

As for the title, I don't think I aught to change it just because Celine Dion has a song by that title. Aren't there innumerable lovely girls by the name Amanda. That doesn't change the fact that my content is original. Although I could agree with Dovina that the title 'waking hours' might sound more apt, by way of relating to the poem, rather than it being a title of someone else's song.

All the same, thanks all of you for the instant votes. I'm surprised that it's pretty quick.




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