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Old Friend (Free verse) by drnick

Dear old friend of mine How I've missed you time-to-time In the back of my mind You've been stowed Won't you sing me a song I found my dreams are long gone Somewhere in a letter I told you so My mind cannot fathom Even in post-graduate fashion Just how or why I let you go And as surely as I Won't let our memories die Is as surely As your distance grows

amanda_dcosta 30-Mar-06/12:22 PM
Hmmm, not bad. It's got a sing song feel to it. And you've put it as free verse.

OOps sorry. Looks like ecargo out did me in my comment.

This is a common theme, but when well written, it's worth a read, and you've brought out something in it. Good work.




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