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Looking Back (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

Looking back I wonder what my life would be like if I had done things differently I realize that one single tiny thing can change everything I try to picture what my life would be like without certain people Looking back it's hard to remember parts of my life Yet it seems like just yesterday I was in elementry school Where I met my one true love Looking back I wonder how my life would be different If I had never asked him to be my boyfriend It scares me to think of a life without him I think I am supposed to be with him forever Looking back there are some things I wish I had done differently Now I can't change any of it What's done is done

wilco 19-Mar-06/1:25 AM
Some good sentiments, but just not a very...ummm..daring? poem..just not too inventive...could be worked on and turned into something though.




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