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My cousin's baby sitter. (Haiku) by Bachus

Sunshine was fifteen when i popped her ripe cherry. The sunset bled well. Rollicking i sang as i came, and came, and came. Filled her up just right! She broke two nails in my back before i flipped her over. Here cums the encore. I finished her quick. But i got dressed quicker. Cigarette anyone?

Tarquin De La Bog 10-Sep-02/11:50 AM
Clever. 8. The second stanza is the weakest, but the final two are excellent. However young man, you're currently breaking the law by having underage sex, and have been reported to the relevant authorities already. Look forward to a lifetime of desperately shielding your arse from fellow inmates.




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