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There (Free verse) by Dovina

When I get there, I'm going to shout! I'm going to be so very happy. I'll relax because I'm there. I'm not going to work anymore. I'm going to sleep and eat chocolate and watch soap operas because I'll have lots of time. Then I'm going to . . . and . . . What? I hope I never get there.

amanda_dcosta 4-Mar-06/11:07 AM
Dovina, this reminds me of a song...

"We are going,
heaven knows where we are going
We know we are.
We will get there
Heaven knowsthat we will get there
We know we will"

Reading your verse made this song pop up in my head.

By the way, ]where are you going to.... and chocolates are not good for you... think of all the calories and high fat content..... not a good idea. Take my advice, don't go there.




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