poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy.

amanda_dcosta9 Feb 2006

Alchemy, I didn't quite fit in with the first verse. It was rather deceptive. I thought you were praying to God your Father, and that's when I got into the second verse. It go me off balance suddenly or rather off guard. It's written well though, if it's to your parents.