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My cousin's baby sitter. (Haiku) by Bachus

Sunshine was fifteen when i popped her ripe cherry. The sunset bled well. Rollicking i sang as i came, and came, and came. Filled her up just right! She broke two nails in my back before i flipped her over. Here cums the encore. I finished her quick. But i got dressed quicker. Cigarette anyone?

tandem 9-Sep-02/7:39 PM
regardless of how it is categorized..which is rather unimportant in my mind..i really enjoy the subject and diction used. very nice job 9/10




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