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I'm there (Other) by amanda_dcosta

In the kettle of tenderness the rain sweeps God’s Spirit flows and blessings heap One’s heart now knows no sorrow. In the rainbow of laughter angels dance And move about in peaceful trance Love never sways nor falters. In the nursery of silence graces creep To fill the heart of the one who seeks For quiet restful waters. In the arms of love divine and pure There’s peace and joy; my life’s secure. I’m grazing in green pastures.

Dovina 4-Feb-06/7:58 AM
If you are like one of the sheep in Ps. 23, then I think stiking closer to that image would help. The last line and the "restful waters" line are there, but the "love never . . ." line is from Paul. On the other hand, it's pretty hard to write it better than David did.




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