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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

ALChemy 3-Feb-06/12:37 PM
I don't know what the rest of the context of the poem you got that from was but heres what you should do: Take the key words like "kettle" and "sweeps" and look them up for alternate definitions. Here's what I got. "In the glacial lake of tenderness the rain glides by swiftly." The glacial lake being a cold heart that's been melted(by tenderness) and the swift rain being to quickly weather the storms that life brings. But I'm probably way off.




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