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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

amanda_dcosta 3-Feb-06/12:18 PM
Zodiac...As you can see, I have been trying my best to understand haikus and yes, thanks a lot for your FINALLY frank remark ( or is there more to it?)...ha ha. No offence!

I agree, I have to improve on my quality, but aren't I getting somewhere. Besides I've come across a phrase
"In the kettle of tenderness the rain sweeps".... what could it most likely mean or imply. I've got quite a few ideas in my head, but I think I would go for a second opinion.

Still no chance of chat?





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