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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

ALChemy 3-Feb-06/11:49 AM
It's not that it has to be 5-7-5 it's just that you should learn the most restrictive form so that you refine your skills of efficient writing. Much like Daniel-son in the Karate Kid did when he painted the fence. Fundimentals is all I was going for from you.




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