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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

amanda_dcosta 3-Feb-06/11:35 AM
Tell me zodiac, is it technically wrong in the english style(other than the japanese) to write a haiku like the one I've written? I might not have written one on the 5-7-5 outline (actually my first one was), but I tried to convey my idea from the way i've written after reading quite a bit from the haiku sites. I've read some with just 11 syllables in it. I don't think that just because its not 5-7-5, its off track. Don't you agree with that.




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