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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

Dovina 3-Feb-06/7:16 AM
Line 2 has 8 beats. In the original it had the prescribed 7. "Whither" breaks the voice, I think.




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