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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

amanda_dcosta 2-Feb-06/9:31 PM
Wandering black birds
Flying in the blue sky so high,
Pray, tell me whither

Is this better?

Anyway, wandering birds are those that you see flying around in the sky - esp. the crows, looking for food or carcas. They have no specific form or order. They are not migratory birds. I merely asked them where they were off to.




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