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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

Dovina 2-Feb-06/2:05 PM
You will always get quibbles about 5-7-5 in a haiku here on poemranker unless you toe the line. Other are not so picky.

I see the birds as not really wandering, as you understand them, giving more than average credit to birds. Thats good.




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