LilMsLadyPoet2 Feb 2006

Ranger, I believe they are supposed to. 5-7-5
and some have a - afer the 2nd. line.
Are the birds wandering or flying?
'in the sky so high'...uhm...needs work.
Concept> birds, flying, "Oh tell me where" great ending to that concept, but add one necessary word, to make 5 syllables.