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For such is a child’s heart (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

The children play, they’re in the field. Smiles on their faces, innocence. All nature stops to watch and see Such joy, such fun, such radiance! For such is a child’s heart. They toss the ball, beckon and call Each other funny names, while The sunshine bright, a wondrous sight Wants to join in their games. For such is a child’s heart. And when to bed tucked in at night Faces aglow, hearts satisfied, Creator God smiles radiantly On such pure childhood ecstasy. For such is a child’s heart.

amanda_dcosta 29-Jan-06/9:24 PM
Thanks Ranger. I did write this about three to four times, revising the paras till what its turned out. But have to admit, didn't change the first line. Didn't give that a second thought. Probably that was because that was what gave me the rest of the poem. About it being too bulky, is it, really? Didn't think so. Anyhow, shall give it another thought, though I might not post it here. Thanks.




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