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Tree of Life (Haiku) by ALChemy

A lone winter birch filled with leaves bright red. They sing, then fly to warm nests.

amanda_dcosta 25-Jan-06/6:10 PM
Does this have to be precicely accurate or correct in matter, i mean about the red/yellow leaves? I wouldn't know the difference. See, you guys are influencing my vote thought now. I might have commented spontaneously but now I keep wondering whether the matter is correct. All the same... its good. Poetic imagery of bright red leaves then it is!




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