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The Glass (Free verse) by dancin_n_da_moonlite

The Glass separates me from life, so I am seeing from a different angle. The Glass makes everything seem sharper and harder and edgier. But that’s what the glass was made for. I have been told in the past that contacts would be so much prettier and would most assuredly bring out all my nice features. But I have also been told in the past that contacts make it all seem real and you can hardly tell they are there they are so comfortable. No. I don’t want it to seem real. I want to feel it. I want it to remind me that if I look out the corner of my eye I can see the true life on the other side of The Glass.

INTRANSIT 24-Jan-06/4:21 PM
Blow this up. by that I mean add to it. talk more about the rim or the fit or scratches. this could be a meat and potatoes meal. add everything you can think of. then post again and I'll do what I can to help.




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