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A Schizophrenic (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

He shakes his head, Rolls on his bed, Speaks gibberish With eyes deep red. He fights and kicks, He shouts and spits, And makes his family Lose their wits. With hair unkept, Mood, not his best He lives his life A real test. He's labelled 'mad' Inside he's sad, No one knows him Nor understands. Alas, we call ourselves human And yet what do we see We're totally numb to those desperate Whose lives we do not feel. He's crying out, oh! don't you know He's longing to be near To anyone who'll love him And want to call him 'dear'. So heed his call and do not tarry Although with him there's cause for worry. Or only when we're in his shoes We'll understand the schizo news.

amanda_dcosta 24-Jan-06/1:42 AM
Alchemy, I think I know what your getting at - more about showing or expressing the schizo mood in scizo terms. But then, correct me if I am wrong, its not necessary that one should be able to write something happy when one is always negative or moody, or a happy person could do vice versa. A lot comes from what's within you, and I find it difficult to express otherwise. I'm terrible at faking... have been caught redhanded many times....ha ha ha.




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