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What Matters (Haiku) by Dovina

Bright eyes flanked his chin, tender smile above his nose. I knew he loved me.

amanda_dcosta 12-Jan-06/8:39 AM
Excuse me, but spell out the 17 syllables here. Am I losing something. I still find it confusing figuring out a Haiku. 5-7-5?




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