lmp9 Jan 2006

line 10: "Misfortune's been out friend;" (add the "'s")

line 17: add a comma after "Lord", as in line 1.

not my style poem, but a nice sentiment. i suppose the aetheists don't deserve a happy new year? it is, in my opinion, the danger of writing a prayer-type poem, i suppose.
thanks and happy new year in return.