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A New Year Prayer (Other) by amanda_dcosta

O Lord, bless us this New Year. On Your name we call. And may Your Holy Spirit Fall upon us all. Grant us grace and wisdom Give us peace of mind, For worldly strife and troubles Don’t treat us kind. Hard times have been our brother, Misfortune been our friend; Selfishness and greed live on That seems to never end. This New Year may we start afresh Forgiving all that’s wrong; And thus resolving to begin A life that’s filled with love. O Lord bless us this New Year. On Your name we call. For start, fill us with love to share With each and everyone.

amanda_dcosta 8-Jan-06/9:08 PM
Zodiac, thanks. and a happy new year to you. You still haven't reviewed my poem 'i love to see the sunrise'... was asking for your opinion on 'enjambment' which i tried to build it upon. the poem ain't great, but would love to note your construction opinion. Thanks.




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