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Romans 8:28 (Lyric) by amanda_dcosta

I sit here alone deep in thought What will my future bring me? It's so uncertain, and distrought There's million things that scare me. There's dreams not met, there's hopelessness, And feelings of despair For each time I thread on this path I'm scared and run away. Yes, this is life as we see it Its common where we live To turn around, and with a bound to gallop out of reach. But, when i met my Saviour, He changed my life around, He held me with his loving arms, And carried me right on. And now I live with courage, I do not fear the night For by the name of Jesus I see the light. I see the light that guides me I see the light that shines Inside me, growing brighter As with love in me he smiles. He gives me hope to dream on He gives me hope to grow And with each and every passing day I see him more and more. I am not scared or worried My spirit not forlorn There's radiant plans for me I know Because I love him so.

ALChemy 29-Dec-05/4:17 PM
The last line of stanza 2? maybe change to "I'm running away scared." But as far as I'm concerned it's fine to mix the styles up a little. This isn't your best work though. I believe on God. I'm not sure why.
Maybe you can give me some logical explanation for believing in God.




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