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ReplyTo a comment on More 7-Eleven holdups. by Bachus.

god'swife6 Sep 2002

Perfect. You have left thirsting for more. Someones probably going to whine at you that the 4th has 8 syllables instead of 7, so you might want to change <isn't> to <ain't>. I don't give a fuck, these are perfect for a monologue. The Haiku bandit.