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More 7-Eleven holdups. (Haiku) by Bachus

Hey! Fuck you Kim Chong! I want quick picks and zig zags. Don't look at my face! You! Reach for the sky! Give me all your malt liqour. Do you have chore-boy? Excuse me lady! But get on the fucking ground! By the way, nice hat. Guess what college boy! This just aint your lucky night. Drop your pants punk ass.

god'swife 6-Sep-02/7:56 PM
Perfect. You have left thirsting for more. Someones probably going to whine at you that the 4th has 8 syllables instead of 7, so you might want to change <isn't> to <ain't>. I don't give a fuck, these are perfect for a monologue. The Haiku bandit.




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