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CHRISTMAS EVERYDAY (Other) by amanda_dcosta

Baby Jesus, true and sweet, Within my heart be born and greet, Shine that star that shone so bright Two thousand years ago one night. Come dear Lord and help me share Your birth within me, to love, to care - Baby Jesus, the One so blest Be born in me and be my guest. I need You Baby everyday - In all I do, in all I say. I need You Baby in all I think Lest each day I begin to sink. Jesus help me not to wait For just one special day each year But let Christmas within my heart Be everyday through joy and tear.

ALChemy 18-Dec-05/10:24 AM
Good, now say it in a way you've never heard or read.
Use images and scenes unique in your own personal life as metaphors. How does baby Jesus compare to your own children? Ask yourself what if I loved Jesus in the same way I love my children? How would that change the way I approach my faith? Would it make me a better Christian or a worse one? What if, while nailed to the cross as he said "Father, why have you forsaken me?", what if he was not looking to the skies but instead he was looking us straight in the eyes?



Now write.




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