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I love to see the sunrise (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

I love to see the sunrise And the dawn of each new day. For, there's surprises all around And things to do and say. Yesterday's gone, I lived it through With joy and work and mistakes too. And when a new day thus begins I see the steps my life's taken. I look at all that i have done, The pain I've given anyone, And then begin my mending plan Through remorse and a helping hand. I love to see the sunrise And the dawn of each new day. There's hope and love and a beautiful start To all the dreams within my heart.

amanda_dcosta 16-Dec-05/6:45 PM
Dovina , wilco.....hmmmm, yep, i agree that 'remorse and helping hand' is a bit dry.

And for the opening phrase, the reason is found in lines 3,4 of verse 1. or is that also vague?




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