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CHRISTMAS EVERYDAY (Other) by amanda_dcosta

Baby Jesus, true and sweet, Within my heart be born and greet, Shine that star that shone so bright Two thousand years ago one night. Come dear Lord and help me share Your birth within me, to love, to care - Baby Jesus, the One so blest Be born in me and be my guest. I need You Baby everyday - In all I do, in all I say. I need You Baby in all I think Lest each day I begin to sink. Jesus help me not to wait For just one special day each year But let Christmas within my heart Be everyday through joy and tear.

Dovina 13-Dec-05/3:54 PM
Please do not allow zodiac to cause sorrow. You may write in whatever style you wish and in promotion of whatever opinions you have. I wish, though, that you would reconsider lines like "Baby Jesus, true and sweet," for what they are really saying. I would not like to see you not give up any of your beliefs, but rather think deeply about how you might convey them in meaningful ways to folks who may differ.

I look foreward to seeing your more recent poems. The ones from 1996 must be inferior to what you are writing now.




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