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CHRISTMAS EVERYDAY (Other) by amanda_dcosta

Baby Jesus, true and sweet, Within my heart be born and greet, Shine that star that shone so bright Two thousand years ago one night. Come dear Lord and help me share Your birth within me, to love, to care - Baby Jesus, the One so blest Be born in me and be my guest. I need You Baby everyday - In all I do, in all I say. I need You Baby in all I think Lest each day I begin to sink. Jesus help me not to wait For just one special day each year But let Christmas within my heart Be everyday through joy and tear.

Dovina 13-Dec-05/10:02 AM
I understand that you wish to share your Christian faith. I wish you would give it a little more thought before writing though. Most of these lines are trite. May I suggest reading CS Lewis, "Mere Christianity" for ideas on how to make your beliefs more digestable.




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