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Emma Barksdale (Free verse) by rahson_s

Demanding is a woman having difficulties living such a stressful life, a woman missing love, with her eyes wide shut, she looks down on us with the hate for her country engraved in her eyes, a woman in love with death, only she knows the feeling of being hopeless, all misunderstands her, a woman different in style, her life remains shameless and her time here on earth remains effortless, she is definitely having difficulties living such a precious life www.utopiawright.com

wilco 8-Dec-05/1:35 PM
Well that's actually pretty damn cool.

Regarding the "definitely", I was thinking that

"She, having difficulties
living such a precious life."

might be good..I don't know...whatever




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