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brave new world still a bit timid (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation

i feel like neutral milk hotel felt after reading ann frank's diary. such a lame and standard novel fed to us among the drivel of our standardized education. i guess it's lame to see this as a feely fraught with emptiness charged upon each other. this site, these lives, these open channels broadband subterranean tunnels link us to each other. though we'd never have one another.

wilco 30-Oct-05/4:00 PM
Although I think you're completely misinterpreting Jeff Mangum's lyrics, there are still parts of this that I like (such as the third stanza). Also, points for knowing who Neutral Milk Hotel is...




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