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Thorns (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Nothing is spoken. The door is simply shut. The television gasping for clarity is switched off, allowing the room to offer itself to moonlight. Breathing seems amplified, air cold and indifferent and all matter lay dead in the shifting darkness. We are equal in blackness. Shadows separate across the bed reaching for trousers and nightgown, the clumsy religion of cowering to cover what is not concealed. I could say something, that is my right but they did not expect me so soon and there are things they need to talk about. So I open the door take a last look at the living room furniture, the Titian imitation on the wall and leave my house.

horus8 4-Sep-02/12:39 PM
i have no problem ripping you off d.a, and i'm sorry people get us confused(lol!) there are absolutely no similarities, other than the fact that i blatently steal some of your more choice expressions and terminologies...out of pure distate and seedy jealousy...besides your way to goth and intelligent(aloof and serious) to ever realy be compared to a drug drenched wannabe like me, or was it drug adeled, or drug altered? any way drugged...so...once and for all...dark angel is not horus8. he's god's wife and zzinia..what talent...what speed..what discipline...and POWER!...WHAT A JOKE! wanna buy some coke? how about a gram of heroin...oh wait i know.....speed!!!!anything for you threep choadk...besides if you go to da's website you'll find it festooned with yards and yards of intelectual tripe, but if you go to horus8's web site you'll see fabricated biographys and high paid models doing back flips and flexing tattooed abs(he was an expensive model from italy, cost me a fortune)(since in real life i'm actually a threehundred pound canadian hockey fan named mildred)on da's web site we have a clear point being demonstrated, "the powerof the shadow is everywhere" were on mine it's just a mockery of how bogus hollywood is and egotisticaly superior to all other places that have existed or will...pray we don't combine our wicked intentions(d.a and mildred) and take over the known universein the name of CTHULU!




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