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Watcher (Free verse) by windyone

There is an emptiness inside she never felt before. She can't focus,her mind wanders endlessly,her body racked with pain. Her lover can't, or won't love her. What's the difference? It's all the same to her. Her days seem endless, fruitless, sitting in a chair, most attempts to do anything bring unrelenting pain. She cries because she is no longer herself.

wilco 25-May-05/6:31 PM
What's the point to all of this? Could've been a lot shorter saying:

Sad Girl
No Love
Pain
She's changed.




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