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Variance of the tapeworm (Free verse) by horus8

If you're such a satanist.....why do you whine and sniffle ? If you're such a christian....why haven't you read the bible ? If you're such a genius......why can't you dress yourself ? If you're such a writer....why do you sell insurance instead ? If you're such a dealer....why don't you ever win something ? If you're such a father....why's your father's grave bare ? If you're such a mother....why don't your children call you ? If you're such a painter...why are your hands so fucking clean ? If you're such a sculpter...why do you live in a bland box ? If you're such a giver.....why don't you have any friends ? If you're such a teacher...why do you pretend to be disabled? If you're such a ghost.....why aren't you dead ? If you're such a leader....why are you alone ? If you're such a singer......why are you in Vegas ? If you're suck a cook.......why do you live in Saltlake city ? If you're such an alien......why do you have a green card ? If you're such a con.......why do you dress like a clown ? If you're such a creator....why do you play with a slinky ? If you're such a left hander...why can't i see your toes ? If you invented what was before could you suck any much more air from a vent if that drift in was indeed just another vaccine for a yearning to hear yourself be heard by others you expose belly for one more rub i cringe serve a helping flotilla put your head to rest, put your needs aside put your coat away, put that drink on a coaster put your feet on your table, put your tele on put your dog in its place, put your spouse into submission Wow! i'm just so glad to be a part of it all thank you, fuck you, knew you, screw you once twice sunk next.

Bachus 31-Aug-02/6:27 PM
D.a! damnit! you are a bastard, and no fun...i really thought you you were a cream filled doughnut and not a doghnutless cream, ah well...maybe next time our tango will be more static and less stated. luv the one who was but wasn't that which you found worth talking silent shot puts for the love of track and field and the 'game' i am touched by whovers creation that was and moved to break wind and drop some friends off at the pool...cordialy yours, forevered! and sooner than you think. prepare!




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