Replying to a comment on:

You Were There (Free verse) by danevie

When I need a friend to talk to You were there to talk to me When I need a helping hand You were there to reach for me When I'm happy & gay You were there to laugh with me When I'm sad & lonely You were there to cheer me up When I got high scores You were there to tell me "You're amazing" When I got low scores You were there to tell me "It's allright better next time" When I was down You were there to stand me up When I was falling You were there to catch me & hold me with your arms When I was a foolish one You were there to tell me "You're so stupid" When I was sick You were there to take care of me until I feel better When I was crying You were there to wipe away my tears When I'm cold & freezing You were there to hug me like a teddybear When I was lost You were there to find me When I was hurt You were there to ease the pain When I was hopeless You were there to give me hope & strenght to live Now I knew, why you're always there for me Co'z you love me Do you? ------------

dancin_n_da_moonlite 9-Apr-05/9:14 AM
you have the disconcerting habit of having someone remedy your ills in the past tense while you are still in the present-----




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001